Thursday, December 4, 2008

Feed Back for first draft photostory

My first draft was all about the right pictures music and timing of my voice and placement. All combined I knew it would culminate into a story that seems well organized. Because Organization of all aspects of storytelling, I realized, it is the key to drawing in the viewer.

So sound transition was way to high for me. My voice was not loud enough to hear from the speakers.

So with those 2 things I need to adjust I also noticed that my photo transitions were to redundant so I will be mixing and matching for the photo transition to be less repeated.

I also need to enlarge my Credits for easier view and there are many pictures with black spaces on the sides. This was intentional so that the picture is given more of a pop with the color saturation I changed for each photo to give it the mood of how I wanted to present my story.

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